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What with the war
and the bad blood
and the batty city
and the weather

and mother in the attic in a strop
because the cat dropped a tea cup; and the cat tizzy-
whizzy at the dog's skirmishes beneath
her bed, at the demons she eye-spies
at sunrise; and what else,

auntie not speaking to uncle not speaking to grandpa
not speaking to me, for giving him lavender soap;

and with gyp from the old flesh wound

which the doctor said
I ought to get tattooed
a toothy mouth about its gaping black tongue
he said, and waggle it at parties, hah, hah,

which is a salve but not a solution;

and with the weeds in the garden
decay in the weeds
worms in the mould
and maggots in everything;

and the pot overfrothing, rice spilling in the kitchen,
sauce splattering on the lino, orangey and meaty bits, the kids on their knees
licking it up, which is sweet; and the slugs

which slop slime in the porridge but are delicious in stew,

in winter; what with the winter, the sleet; the windscreen an ice sheet;
holey socks; grey toes; bubbling nose; sorrowing bones; synapses comatose;

and the washing that is growing like an ogre made of linen;

and what with council tax and politics;
the seven year tithe due soon
for which the axe must be ground,
priest summoned, candles lit,
last rites righted, throat slit;

and a host of new waterborne diseases we must fight off
with longships and helmets and spears;

and mars to explore
and supper to bungle
and five knock-knocking regrets to knock on the head
by Wednesday, or Thursday at the latest, I'm afraid

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:iconcrumpetsharvey:
Felt like writing a poem. Lots of other things I should be doing.


Update: Guess what? March Hamilton Media are going to publish a collection of my poems for middle-grade/teens-ish-sort-of-age. That will include this one, House on my Head, The lovesong of Flird and Memoon and Dog at the End of the World (almost certainly the title poem and generally being kept under wraps; so if you read it when I posted it last year you're among a privileged group ;) ) as well as 50-odd poems you haven't yet seen.

The collection should be out around April/May and will be published as a hardback and ebook. If you want to know when it's coming out you can sign up to the March Hamilton mailing list by e-mailing mailinglist@marchhamilton.com. Otherwise, just keep an eye on my journal because obviously I'll be mentioning it around that sort of time as well ;p.

WOOO!
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:iconpopsiclerot:
It's cooooooold in heeeeeeeere.
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:iconcrumpetsharvey:
`CrumpetsHarvey Nov 8, 2010  Professional Writer
It's bloody cold here. And the heating's broken.
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:iconpopsiclerot:
It's alright.
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:iconaladdin-sane:
Great poem. Should be published!
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:iconcrumpetsharvey:
`CrumpetsHarvey Nov 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Maybe when it is more polish-y...

:)
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:iconaladdin-sane:
What're you looking to alter? I hope further revisions don't diminish the manic energy of the poem. : - )
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:iconcrumpetsharvey:
`CrumpetsHarvey Nov 9, 2010  Professional Writer
Nnnno. By which I mean "I hope they don't too, but I can't promise". There are little bits I'm not entirely happy with and want to tweak. I'll try to be gentle.
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:iconaladdin-sane:
Heh. That sounds a little perverse - but I guess I that can't be helped. 'Gentle' away (I'm turning that into a verb.)
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*interzonepolice Nov 6, 2010  Professional General Artist
maggots in everything.

head all full of dreams.

i really like "eye-spies at sunrise"
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:iconcrumpetsharvey:
`CrumpetsHarvey Nov 6, 2010  Professional Writer
sometimes I rhymes
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